Comin Round Again - Houdmouth (WIP exposure Jack Collins)

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  1. Hi Jack, I like the 3rd image you have on here and the 1st image somewhat. I kind of like the 5th image. I am not feeling the 2nd, 6th, and 7th images. Probably replace them and experiment with the editing more and shoot subjects up-close. That could help. Good luck and good job!

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  2. Hi Jack. Ernie has some nice comments above. I slightly disagree with some, but think he is spot on with others. I tend to like image #2. I also think that image #3 is working rather well. I enjoy the road, but hate the camper in it. My eyes go directly to the words on the back. Retake that without cars! I would also re-shoot for gray. I think you are too far away from the subject and they are a bit boring. Try cropping the last image leaving only the horizon line and sky. It will be more dramatic that way. I'm on the fence about image #1. I would shoot more for White, but this image could remain as there is something soothing about it. Good Luck!

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