Hi Runa, I love your white images! However, consider playing around with either the contrast or clarity to make the textures and black in both photos pop a bit more. I think doing that would take your photos to the next level. Your last 2 images in the gray section are your strongest compared to the other 2 so I would continue to work on those. Lastly, I love your black images! I think the textures are so cool and captivating.
Hi Runa, I definitely agree with Dana here about the white photos. Try to play around with more texture but also keeping the idea of highlight in mind. I am not really feeling the gray photos. I would replace it. And I agree about the black images. Good luck and good job!
Hi! I love both of your black images! I think they are super strong and I love that there is a range in value, yet they are still almost pretty black. I also really like the lines in the first white image. While I like your gray images, I think that they could be a little darker only because I initially thought they were part of the white images.
Hi Runa. I think you can crop the White images so they are a bit more impactful. I'll download them and send them to you in an email so you can see what I mean. I also think you can pull a bit more texture out of both of them. I feel as though the first 3 gray images work pretty well, but would lose the last one. I find your second black image to be more successful than the first one. Overall however, really nice work! I think you can fix most of your images in LR, but would encourage you to replace the first image in the Black images. Good Luck!
Hi Runa, I love your white images! However, consider playing around with either the contrast or clarity to make the textures and black in both photos pop a bit more. I think doing that would take your photos to the next level. Your last 2 images in the gray section are your strongest compared to the other 2 so I would continue to work on those. Lastly, I love your black images! I think the textures are so cool and captivating.
ReplyDeleteHi Runa, I definitely agree with Dana here about the white photos. Try to play around with more texture but also keeping the idea of highlight in mind. I am not really feeling the gray photos. I would replace it. And I agree about the black images. Good luck and good job!
DeleteHi! I love both of your black images! I think they are super strong and I love that there is a range in value, yet they are still almost pretty black. I also really like the lines in the first white image. While I like your gray images, I think that they could be a little darker only because I initially thought they were part of the white images.
ReplyDeleteHi Runa. I think you can crop the White images so they are a bit more impactful. I'll download them and send them to you in an email so you can see what I mean. I also think you can pull a bit more texture out of both of them. I feel as though the first 3 gray images work pretty well, but would lose the last one. I find your second black image to be more successful than the first one. Overall however, really nice work! I think you can fix most of your images in LR, but would encourage you to replace the first image in the Black images. Good Luck!
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