Exposure WIP







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  1. Hi! I LOVE your white flowers, I think it is an amazing picture but perhaps it would be even better if you crop the background a bit and focus specifically on the flowers. I also really like your next black picture with plants, it has beautiful dark contrast but I am also tempted to crop it a bit. The last picture seems to me a bit too overexposed so I would replace it. And the first three, I am not sure which ones are supposed to be gray or black, so I think you should try to make gray pictures recognizably gray. Good Luck!

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  2. Hi Joshua, I love these series you got going on here. I love images 3-5. They really fit the assignment very strongly. For the rest, especially the first 2 images, I would replace them. I am on the fence about the last image. I actually think the last image is fine for now. Other than that, good luck and great job!

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  3. Hey man, I really like most of your pictures. I think that your last picture was a bit overexposed, so I would also replace it. Your 3-5 pictures are perfect in my opinion so I would definitely keep them. I also really like your 1-2 pictures, but I still feel like you could do more with them. Besides that, I think you did an amazing job with the assignment.

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  4. Hi Josh. Images 2, 4 & 5 are starting to be successful. I would retake the exterior door, but move in closer so you are filling the frame with just the door or just a portion of the door. This will make it even more gray and more successful. Images 1 & 3 are not all that creative in terms of seeing and image 6 is just too Over-exposed! I would keep shooting. Good Luck!

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