Hello Jackie! I absolutely love the third picture and the last two pictures. They are very pleasing to the eye and have a dreamy touch to them. My only concern is whether your top two pictures have met the standards for a 'black' picture like Andy expects because they still seem to have a lot of white (comparing it to the black pictures we were shown as examples) maybe it might help if you darkened the pictures a bit more :) overall awesome job! Your Greys and whites have come out very well
Hi Jackie, I really love your 1st, 2nd, and 6th images. I think they fit very well with the assignment. I would encourage you to use similar approach with the rest of the images. I think abstracting things might work in your favor here. I see a lot of potential with getting up-close with the mask for example. Shoot more up-close and process them to fit the assignment and you should be good. Good luck!
Hi Jackie. Images 1, 5 & 6 you must keep. I would replace images 2 & 4 and try cropping image 3 as I think you can make it better. The reason I don't think image 2 is successful is because your first image is just Absolutely Stunning! The light, the feeling, the emotion. It's all there! And that's exactly what I'm looking for! Keep shooting and Good Luck!
Hello Jackie! I absolutely love the third picture and the last two pictures. They are very pleasing to the eye and have a dreamy touch to them. My only concern is whether your top two pictures have met the standards for a 'black' picture like Andy expects because they still seem to have a lot of white (comparing it to the black pictures we were shown as examples) maybe it might help if you darkened the pictures a bit more :) overall awesome job! Your Greys and whites have come out very well
ReplyDeleteHi Jackie, I really love your 1st, 2nd, and 6th images. I think they fit very well with the assignment. I would encourage you to use similar approach with the rest of the images. I think abstracting things might work in your favor here. I see a lot of potential with getting up-close with the mask for example. Shoot more up-close and process them to fit the assignment and you should be good. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Jackie. Images 1, 5 & 6 you must keep. I would replace images 2 & 4 and try cropping image 3 as I think you can make it better. The reason I don't think image 2 is successful is because your first image is just Absolutely Stunning! The light, the feeling, the emotion. It's all there! And that's exactly what I'm looking for! Keep shooting and Good Luck!
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