Hi Aditya, hope all is well with you. I would say increase the highlight on the first 2 images and maybe replace the 2nd image. They look a bit flat. For the last image, I kind of prefer an uncropped version. With images like that dealing with mirror, it's best to have the environment included as well. I like the 4th image here! The 3rd image, however, isn't doing it for me. I would maybe replace it or keep it in color. Also, adjust the orientation on the 5th image. It looks a bit off. Keep taking more images and good luck!
I love the second portrait of the young lady laying in the grass! I think the angle of the photo is so captivating. The only critique I have would be to consider changing the orientation of the photo so it isn't upside down. I also love your last self portrait. I think you used the reflection really well. Just consider deepening the contrast of the photo to add a bit more dimension to it. Lastly, I do like your first image, but I think the background is a bit distracting. Consider cropping the image in and on top to get rid of the trees in the background and to make the image about the young girl.
Hi Adi. Images 2 & 4 are very nice! I very much enjoy the young woman in the grass with her eyes closed. We can all imagine ourselves in that exact place and it allows us to consider what she is or what we would be thinking about. Nice! Images 1 & 3 don't have the same connection and are a bit more straight forward. I would also like you to rework the self portraits and try to use the frame and composition better. Those are also under processed. Good Luck! Andy
Hi Aditya, hope all is well with you. I would say increase the highlight on the first 2 images and maybe replace the 2nd image. They look a bit flat. For the last image, I kind of prefer an uncropped version. With images like that dealing with mirror, it's best to have the environment included as well. I like the 4th image here! The 3rd image, however, isn't doing it for me. I would maybe replace it or keep it in color. Also, adjust the orientation on the 5th image. It looks a bit off. Keep taking more images and good luck!
ReplyDeleteI love the second portrait of the young lady laying in the grass! I think the angle of the photo is so captivating. The only critique I have would be to consider changing the orientation of the photo so it isn't upside down. I also love your last self portrait. I think you used the reflection really well. Just consider deepening the contrast of the photo to add a bit more dimension to it. Lastly, I do like your first image, but I think the background is a bit distracting. Consider cropping the image in and on top to get rid of the trees in the background and to make the image about the young girl.
ReplyDeleteHi Adi. Images 2 & 4 are very nice! I very much enjoy the young woman in the grass with her eyes closed. We can all imagine ourselves in that exact place and it allows us to consider what she is or what we would be thinking about. Nice! Images 1 & 3 don't have the same connection and are a bit more straight forward. I would also like you to rework the self portraits and try to use the frame and composition better. Those are also under processed. Good Luck! Andy
ReplyDelete