I love the two people looking out the window and the reflection of the outside onto their faces. It's like the two are blending together, like they're a piece of each other, and also speaks to our being stuck inside away from the world at this time. The difference in light is striking too, with the woman highlighted and the man blending into the scenery. It's a great portrait!
Hi Emma, I agree with Jackie on that portrait. It's amazing! The second image could benefit from having the highlight reduced. I am not sure if you put a vignette on the first image but if you did, I would suggest you take it off or reduce it more to be less evident. The waking up series are good. Try maybe reducing the highlight on the first image of the waking up series. The last image might be my least favorite image. Try to find a different image or getting up-close to get a view where you take it on ground level. Maybe one with the cereal getting in the way of the shot as you try to get a shot of the dark box or one where you take it from box's top looking down with the spilled cereal visible. Great job on these series overall! Good job!
Hi Emma. Really great start. As mentioned above the two people in the window is great and the complexity of the reflection only strengths the image. I want to love the firefighter, but it just isn't there for me. The other two portraits and the image in color are also working for me. I enjoy the sense of movement and restlessness in them. As for the dog, not sold on it. Sorry! Keep working on them, especially the food shots. Good Luck!
Hey Emma! Your three looking out shots are amazing! When I first saw them they inspired me to completely rethink my process for that challenge (and I actually like the firefighter image). I also enjoyed your last image. The dog is super cute :) I think that it could maybe benefit from a little less highlight and maybe a bit of vignette.
Hey Emma, I really love your first two images. To me, they look very complex and beautiful. I also love that they are in B/W, which to me embody the idea of these challenges. Keep up the good work!
Hi Emma, I really like your images! Especially, I like the reflections in the second image and the abstraction in the fifth image. I also like the light and color in the forth image. Great job!
I love the two people looking out the window and the reflection of the outside onto their faces. It's like the two are blending together, like they're a piece of each other, and also speaks to our being stuck inside away from the world at this time. The difference in light is striking too, with the woman highlighted and the man blending into the scenery. It's a great portrait!
ReplyDeleteHi Emma, I agree with Jackie on that portrait. It's amazing! The second image could benefit from having the highlight reduced. I am not sure if you put a vignette on the first image but if you did, I would suggest you take it off or reduce it more to be less evident. The waking up series are good. Try maybe reducing the highlight on the first image of the waking up series. The last image might be my least favorite image. Try to find a different image or getting up-close to get a view where you take it on ground level. Maybe one with the cereal getting in the way of the shot as you try to get a shot of the dark box or one where you take it from box's top looking down with the spilled cereal visible. Great job on these series overall! Good job!
DeleteHi Emma. Really great start. As mentioned above the two people in the window is great and the complexity of the reflection only strengths the image. I want to love the firefighter, but it just isn't there for me. The other two portraits and the image in color are also working for me. I enjoy the sense of movement and restlessness in them. As for the dog, not sold on it. Sorry! Keep working on them, especially the food shots. Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteHey Emma! Your three looking out shots are amazing! When I first saw them they inspired me to completely rethink my process for that challenge (and I actually like the firefighter image). I also enjoyed your last image. The dog is super cute :) I think that it could maybe benefit from a little less highlight and maybe a bit of vignette.
ReplyDeleteHey Emma, I really love your first two images. To me, they look very complex and beautiful. I also love that they are in B/W, which to me embody the idea of these challenges. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Emma, I really like your images! Especially, I like the reflections in the second image and the abstraction in the fifth image. I also like the light and color in the forth image. Great job!
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