Aditya- Work In Progress 2


Room


Inside looking out- outside looking in


Food



Comments

  1. I love your last image because of how you blended movement and abstraction. I also really love your first image, the reflect is very beautiful. For the 5th image, consider increasing the contrast. The image is a bit flat so I think adding some contrast would separate what's in the bag from the actual bag itself.

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    1. Hi Aditya, I agree with Dana on the 5th image. Increase the contrast and also add a bit of highlight in there and it should be fine. Increase the contrast a bit on the last image. I am curious to see what the reflection could look like with a bit of contrast. The 3rd and 4th image is really good. I am not sure if I am seeing this wrong but it seems like the 3rd image is a bit crooked. Tilt it using the left black line as guidance to help align the image. I would encourage to maybe replace the 2nd image and get an image that is more closeup if you still want to stick to the subject matter (comforter/bedsheet). Oh and the first image, I love it! Good job, Aditya! Keep it up!

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  2. Hi Adi. Keep shooting food. These don't hold my interest just yet, as they are bit plain. I do enjoy the movement in the last one, but the overall image isn't strong. I think the room shots are overall pretty nice, but I would encourage you to keep photographing to see what you can come up with. The first image is clam, pleasant and eerie all at the same time. I enjoy how empty it feels. And maybe that's what I want out of the other, a feeling or a mood! Best of Luck!

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