Hi Katya, these series are good. I love the first image especially. If you can take the 2nd image again, take it with the focus in the mirror (faraway), not close-by. Then maybe have someone sleeping in the chair with head peeking out. That would be cool. I think the last image could be better B&W. I can't tell what the 5th image is but I really like it!. My least favorite photo might be the bulb photo but other than that, these are great series once improved. Good job and good luck!
Hi Katya. I agree 100% with the comments above. The 1st image is strong and the others have potential. What I like about the 2nd photo is that at first you don't see it as a mirror, but more as a doorway! But Ernest is right, focus on the far away and maybe someone on the couch. I enjoy the flour on the counter but it is a bit redundant and the bulb is the weakest. I would suggest not shooting food as abstractions or if you do, to try and have other elements in the shot as well. Keep shooting and Best of Luck!
I really like the depth you've created in your photos, especially in the first one. I also really like how sharp and clean cut your photos are.
ReplyDeleteHi Katya, these series are good. I love the first image especially. If you can take the 2nd image again, take it with the focus in the mirror (faraway), not close-by. Then maybe have someone sleeping in the chair with head peeking out. That would be cool. I think the last image could be better B&W. I can't tell what the 5th image is but I really like it!. My least favorite photo might be the bulb photo but other than that, these are great series once improved. Good job and good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Katya. I agree 100% with the comments above. The 1st image is strong and the others have potential. What I like about the 2nd photo is that at first you don't see it as a mirror, but more as a doorway! But Ernest is right, focus on the far away and maybe someone on the couch. I enjoy the flour on the counter but it is a bit redundant and the bulb is the weakest. I would suggest not shooting food as abstractions or if you do, to try and have other elements in the shot as well. Keep shooting and Best of Luck!
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