I love your second image! I think the reflection in the door is brilliant an so captivating, I could look at that photo all day. I feel the same way about your first image, but maybe consider cropping a little from the left. By taking out what seems to be the kitchen + cabinet, I think it would make your image stronger and more focused on the subject of window. Lastly, consider making the fourth photo Black and white. Even though I like the vibrant color of the room, I think it would make the photo interesting.
Hi Jackie, I kind of like the 2nd image as it is. I feel like if you were to crop out the kitchen, it might look a bit odd and would force you to crop out the beautiful door as well. I don't know. It's up to you though. But yes, make the 3rd image B&W as Dana suggested. Besides that, I love all the other photos. Great job!
Hi Jackie. The last image is the weakest, followed by the self-portrait. I would remove those and keep shooting. The others are really wonderful moments and you've captured them beautifully! The reflections hold my interest as does the view looking outside. I also like your use of B&W and Color and I would look at William Eggleston, as you might find his work to fall in line with yours. Best of Luck!
Hey Jackie, I love all of the images that you did in color, they're amazingly saturated and the colors are well coordinated in the photos themselves. I think that the bottom two lack clarity and aren't as visually interesting as the others. I would also consider your content in the very first picture. it is beautifully edited however I think that it is not very outstanding otherwise. All the one isn your room are perfect though and I wouldn't change them at all!
I love your second image! I think the reflection in the door is brilliant an so captivating, I could look at that photo all day. I feel the same way about your first image, but maybe consider cropping a little from the left. By taking out what seems to be the kitchen + cabinet, I think it would make your image stronger and more focused on the subject of window. Lastly, consider making the fourth photo Black and white. Even though I like the vibrant color of the room, I think it would make the photo interesting.
ReplyDeleteHi Jackie, I kind of like the 2nd image as it is. I feel like if you were to crop out the kitchen, it might look a bit odd and would force you to crop out the beautiful door as well. I don't know. It's up to you though. But yes, make the 3rd image B&W as Dana suggested. Besides that, I love all the other photos. Great job!
DeleteHi Jackie. The last image is the weakest, followed by the self-portrait. I would remove those and keep shooting. The others are really wonderful moments and you've captured them beautifully! The reflections hold my interest as does the view looking outside. I also like your use of B&W and Color and I would look at William Eggleston, as you might find his work to fall in line with yours. Best of Luck!
ReplyDeleteHey Jackie, I love all of the images that you did in color, they're amazingly saturated and the colors are well coordinated in the photos themselves. I think that the bottom two lack clarity and aren't as visually interesting as the others. I would also consider your content in the very first picture. it is beautifully edited however I think that it is not very outstanding otherwise. All the one isn your room are perfect though and I wouldn't change them at all!
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