Hi Alex, these are a good start. I would suggest you crop out the top of the 2nd image to make it a 1x1 aspect ratio photo (square photo). I love the glare at the bottom right corner of that image. Keep it. I would say step back when taking the inside/outside series. I see some window frames and lines coming into your photos and would be nice if you consider using them more to your advantage. Look up Yokomizo Shizuka's work and see how she uses the window borders as the frame of the photo. I like the 2nd image and kind of has a personality in there. I would replace the apples images. I think less is more when dealing with food photography in my opinion . Other than that, good job. I see these going in the right direction. Good luck
Hi Alex. Your last three images are really looking great! Keep shooting food and in your room as I feel as though you have more to explore and can create more successful images. You are choosing B&W and color processing very nicely! Best of Luck!
Your pictures are all good and the one that I truly like is the last one! The sharp contrast and clarity is great but I would crop the bottom left so that it is more focused on the tree and that that essentially the focal point.
Hi Alex. I think this is a great start I really like how homey and real-table your fist tow image are I would personally keep those and think they are really good. I think for your 3rd and 6th images they could use a better subject matter to convey a more unique message, Keep up the great work!
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Hi Alex, these are a good start. I would suggest you crop out the top of the 2nd image to make it a 1x1 aspect ratio photo (square photo). I love the glare at the bottom right corner of that image. Keep it. I would say step back when taking the inside/outside series. I see some window frames and lines coming into your photos and would be nice if you consider using them more to your advantage. Look up Yokomizo Shizuka's work and see how she uses the window borders as the frame of the photo. I like the 2nd image and kind of has a personality in there. I would replace the apples images. I think less is more when dealing with food photography in my opinion . Other than that, good job. I see these going in the right direction. Good luck
ReplyDeleteHi Alex. Your last three images are really looking great! Keep shooting food and in your room as I feel as though you have more to explore and can create more successful images. You are choosing B&W and color processing very nicely! Best of Luck!
ReplyDeleteYour pictures are all good and the one that I truly like is the last one! The sharp contrast and clarity is great but I would crop the bottom left so that it is more focused on the tree and that that essentially the focal point.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex. I think this is a great start I really like how homey and real-table your fist tow image are I would personally keep those and think they are really good. I think for your 3rd and 6th images they could use a better subject matter to convey a more unique message, Keep up the great work!
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